Subject Re: Get to know Firebird in 2 minutes
Author Carlos H. Cantu
Thanks for the comments, specially about the "Relational Integrity
rules". It was really wrong and most people didn't notice it
(including myself) ;-)

Carlos

--- In Firebird-general@yahoogroups.com, Christian G├╝tter <news@...>
wrote:
>
> Hi Carlos,
>
> English is not my native language, but when reading your document, I
> think I found some glitches. If it should occur to someone that I am
> not correct, feel free to correct me.
>
> "Relational Integrity rules"
> should perhaps better be: "Referential Integrity Enforcement"
> or "Referential Integrity"
>
> "SuperServer share
> its cache among the database connections and ..."
> Please put an "s" at the end of "share".
>
> "It is a full featured Firebird server
> packed in just one DLL file, as small as 1.5MB."
> I think there has to be a space between "1.5" and "MB".
>
> "Graphic User Interface,"
> Should be "Graphical".
>
> "Some of them are free, others are paid."
> I am not sure if this is correct English.
> You should perhaps write "..., others are not."
> or "..., for others, you have to pay."
>
> "Classic x Superserver"
> should be "Classic vs Superserver".
>
> "in portuguese"
> should have a capital "P".
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Christian
>