Andrew Lowe wrote:

> Don't want to be a "grammar nazi" and not wanting to appear ungrateful
> to Carlos for his work, who from his email address appears to be in
> Brazil and therefore English is probably not his native tongue, but the
> wording could be a bit better.
>
> ----------------
> Are looking for a powerful open source RDBMS with...
>
> should read either:
>
> Are you looking for a powerful open source RDBMS with...
>
> Or
>
> Looking for a powerful open source RDBMS with...
>
> -----------------
> Download now on www.firebirdsql.org
>
> should read
>
> Download now from www.firebirdsql.org
>
> ----------------
> Firebird is your choice
>
> Should read something like
>
> Firebird is your answer
>
> or
>
> Firebird is the answer
>
> But then again, I'm a Civil Engineer by profession and at times
> also have problems with English, but it's my native tongue ;)

If it's really going to be changed, I have some ideas:

1. A powerful open source RDBMS with...
2. Procedures, triggers, ACID transactions...
3. Small footprint, easy install, multiplatform?
4. Sounds impossible?
5. Download now from www.firebirdsql.org

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