Andrew Lowe wrote:

> ----------------
> Are looking for a powerful open source RDBMS with...
>
> should read either:
>
> Are you looking for a powerful open source RDBMS with...
>
> Or
>
> Looking for a powerful open source RDBMS with...

I think, this sound better. (and it's of course grammar ok)

> -----------------
> Download now on www.firebirdsql.org
>
> should read
>
> Download now from www.firebirdsql.org

The 'from' word is right there, but I think, that 'on' is for "computer
English" good too. :D

> ----------------
> Firebird is your choice
>
> Should read something like
>
> Firebird is your answer
>
> or
>
> Firebird is the answer

Yes, 'is the answer' is right.

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